July 31, 2011
state list
LISTEN: In the listening state.
ESTABLISHED: established online online situation.
TIME_WAIT: The line is already waiting in the current state.
-a parameter commonly used to access your local system, open ports, you can use it to check your own system has not been installed on the Trojans (ps: there are many good programs to detect Trojans, but Your goal is to become a real hacker, than just click the manual testing “scan” button better —- just personal opinion). If you Netstat yourself, then find the following information:
Port 12345 (TCP) Netbus
Port 31337 (UDP) Back Orifice
congratulations ! you are the most common Trojan (^_^, 4899 is even above others, and this is a commercial software radmin, now my favorite remote control software)
If you need horse and The port list, then look to the domestic H-stations, or baidu, google it
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# Some principles: Maybe you have a question: “In the port number after the machine name mean anything?
example: Eagle: 2929
ports below 1024 are usually run some network services, ports greater than 1024 to establish a connection with the remote machine.
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continue our study, use the-n parameter. (Netstat-n)
Netstat-n-a parameter is basically a digital form:
C: \> netstat-n
Active Connections
Proto LocalAddress ForeignAddress State
TCP127.0.0.1: 445127.0.0.1:1031 ESTABLISHED
TCP127.0.0 .1:1031127.0.0.1:445 ESTABLISHED
TCP 192.168.1.180:1213 218.85.139.65:9002 CLOSE_WAIT
TCP 192.168.1.180:2416 219.133.63.142:443 CLOSE_WAIT
TCP 192.168.1.180:2443 219.133.63.142:443 CLOSE_WAIT
TCP 192.168.1.180:2907 192.168.1.101:2774 CLOSE_WAIT
TCP 192.168.1.180 : 2916 192.168.1.101:23 ESTABLISHED
TCP 192.168.1.180:2929 219.137.227.10:4899 ESTABLISHED
TCP 192.168.1.180:3048 192.168.1.1:8004 SYN_SENT
TCP 192.168.1.180:3455 218.85.139.65:9002 ESTABLISHED
-a and-n is the most common of the two, I do not fully tested the following results:
1.-n shows the number of host name with that IP address, rather than compute_name [eagle]
2.-n TCP connections only (no where seen in Microsoft documentation, which friends have seen it, let me know Oh ^ _ ^)
get IP equal to get everything, it is most likely to attack the machine stuff, so to hide their IP, access The IP of the hacker is someone very important to hide IP technology is now very popular, but those hidden tools or services you really invisible? I see too, Oh, agents, springboard does not belong to today discussion, one for each IP- simple example, please refer to my previous article [QQ friends with the DOS command check IP address]
-a and-n are the most commonly used commands, if you want to display more detailed information of some agreement, we must this parameter with the-p, it is-a and-n a variant, we look at an example, you will understand: [netstat-p @ @ @ @ @ @ which is TCP or UDP]
C: \> netstat-p tcp
Active Connections
Proto LocalAddress ForeignAddress State
TCP Eagle: microsoft-ds localhost: 1031ESTABLISHED
TCPEagle: 1031localhost: microsoft-ds ESTABLISHED
TCPEagle: 1213218.85.139.65:9002 CLOSE_WAIT
TCPEagle: 2416219.133.63.142: https CLOSE_WAIT < br />
TCPEagle: 2443219.133.63.142: https CLOSE_WAIT
TCPEagle: 2907192.168.1.101:2774 CLOSE_WAIT
TCPEagle: 2916192.168.1.101: telnetESTABLISHED
TCPEagle: 2929219.137.227.10:4899 ESTABLISHED
TCPEagle: 3455218.85.139.65:9002 ESTABLISHED
September 20, 2011
Daquan terms of foreign trade (international trade, terms of delivery terms strong> ) strong> the following share from http:// talken.spiiker.com / bec / strong> export credit export credit
export subsidies export subsidy
commodity dumping dumping
foreign exchange dumping exchangedumping
preferential tariff specialpreferences
bonded warehouse bondedwarehouse
trade surplus of favorable balance oftrade
trade deficit unfavorable balance oftrade
import quota import quotas
free trade free tradezone
value of foreign trade value of foreigntrade
international trade value of VALUE of internationaltrade
GSP generalized system ofpreferences-GSP
MFN most-favored nationtreatment-MFNT
strong> to pay Cargo delivery
ships steamship (abbreviated SS)
shipment, shipment shipment
charter charter (the charteredshep)
delivery time time of delivery
certain extent, charter voyage charter;
Shipment time of shipment
time charter time charter < br />
shipper (usually the exporter) shipper, consignor
consignee consignee
liner regular shipping liner
barge lighter
class shipping space
tanker tanker
customs clearance of goods
land receipts cargo receipt
delivery to take delivery ofgoods
air waybill airway bill
original bill of lading original B \ L
selected port (any port) optional port
selected port fees optional charges
election expenses by the buyer in Hong Kong pay optional charges to beborne by the Buyers or optional charges for Buyers ccount
January shipment shipment during January or January shipment
the end of January shipment shipment not later thanJan.31st. or shipment on or before Jan.31st.
a / b May shipment shipment during Jan. / Feb. or Jan. / Feb.shipment
In ……( time) in two batches shipment shipment during …. in two lots < br />
at ……( time) average in two batches shipped shipment during …. in two equal lots
points three months shipment in three monthlyshipments < br />
points for three months, the average monthly shipment in three equalmonthly shipments
immediate shipment immediateshipments
immediate shipment promptshipments
30 days after receipt of the letter of credit shipment shipments within 30 days after receipt of L / C
does not allow partial shipments partial shipment notallowed / partial shipment not permitted
allow partial shipment partial shipment not unacceptable
September 19, 2011
1, how to download business certificate (MD5 CODE / MD5 Key)?
landing IPS background, click on ontact -> ownload IPS certificate -> ownload the current certificate with otepad to open the file, the contents of the business certificate. Copy the code in the background or set it.
test merchant Manage Website: http://merchant.ips.net.cn/
formal business background landing site: http://merchant. ips.com.cn /
online test ICPAY business certificate number: http://www.bobochiu.com/tools/icpay/
election official test environment environment businesses and certificate number into your own, do not change directly to the page of other tests, such as a jump to the page that merchants pay for the certificate number is correct. 2, the background of the test site and businesses number?
test Manage Website: http://merchant.ips.net.cn/
test submission website: https://pay.ips.net.cn/icpay / customization / foreign trade / payment.aspx
Contact No.: 222378
certificate: GFKQMpBYlyw2HTsm0hChuhylN2oRcrDdcSPm7FaMvWNdMnNqFm tGL2yZGZ2K0lvukJPp35dl7qmOKLOZfyBqxxJaUqVYCGMAaTt3O Xm9888UGZEwATd2Z5wnzpKCa5Xr
background Password: 1111113, There are no test of the international credit card?
Visa test card number: 4111111111111111
Master test card number: 5105105105105100
valid CVV codes and other information and fill in any value
< br /> As the IPS is more rigorous risk control, the same card number three times a day can not pay more than the failure (or success after two), otherwise the wind will intercept data control. Please try to use their own credit card (Visa or Master logo to have) to do the test, in addition to card number information can be free to fill out outside.
stressed: credit card number can not be tested in a real business number in the test! 4, how to test payment interface?
1) Test whether the interface normal mall
1> set 222 378, corresponding to submit the test certificate and address
2> submit the test order
3> in the payment page to view page source, search for “pMerAmount” to view its corresponding “value” is the correct amount in RMB. [Please make sure! ]
4> Enter the test bank card number
5> and display the results back to the mall to pay results
6> landing mall background check order payment results
7> landing IPS test results of background check transactions
2) test whether the number of businesses receiving
1> set the real submission number and a real business address (https://pay.ips.com.cn/icpay/customization/foreig ntrade / payment.aspx)
2> new products $ 0.02
3> submit their test orders or test to find the familiar old customers to submit orders
4> enter real credit card information online payment
5> IPS background check landing real trading results
6> log store the results of the background check paid orders
3) tested.
July 31, 2011
netstat strong> command Detailed strong>
strong> Netstat for display and IP, TCP, UDP and ICMP protocols related statistics are generally used for testing the machine for each port network connectivity.
Sometimes, if your computer receives the data reported to the data that caused the error or failure, you should not be surprised, TCP / IP could allow these types of errors, and can automatically re-sent packets. However, if the total number of accounts for the error of the received IP datagram a large percentage, or the number is rapidly increasing it, then you should use the Netstat check out why there is such situation.
Netstat detailed list of parameters
(Winxp)
C: \> netstat /?
display protocol statistics and current TCP / IP network connections.
NETSTAT [-a] [-b] [-e] [-n] [-o] [-p proto] [-r] [-s] [-v] [interval] < br />
-a displays all connections and listening ports.
-b shows included in creating each connection or listening port of the executable components. In some cases, a known executable components
have multiple independent components, and in these cases included in the connection or listening port to create the component sequences are shown.
this case, the executable name at the bottom of the component [], the top is the call of the components, and so on, until the TCP / IP
part. Note that this option may take a long time, if you do not have sufficient permissions may fail.
-e Displays Ethernet statistics. This option can be used with-s
option combination.
-n in digital form address and port number.
-o display associated with each connection belongs to the process ID.
-p proto shows connections for the protocol specified by proto; proto
can be one of the following protocols: TCP, UDP, TCPv6 or UDPv6.
if used in conjunction with the-s option to display statistics by protocol, proto may be one of the following agreement:
IP, IPv6, ICMP, ICMPv6, TCP, TCPv6 , UDP, or UDPv6.
-r Displays the routing table.
-s show statistics by protocol. By default, displays IP,
IPv6, ICMP, ICMPv6, TCP, TCPv6, UDP and UDPv6 statistical information;
-p option specifies the default sub- set.
-v used in conjunction with the-b option will display included in the
for all executable components to create a connection or listening port
the component.
interval Redisplay selected statistics, each display
pause between the time interval (in seconds). Press CTRL C to stop re-
display statistics. If omitted, netstat displays the current configuration information
(only once)
(Win2000)
C: \> netstat /?
Displays protocol statistics and current TCP / IP network connections.
NETSTAT [-a] [-e] [-n] [-s] [-p proto] [-r] [interval]
-a Displays all connections and listening ports.
-e Displays Ethernet statistics. This may be combined with the-s
option.
-n Displays addresses and port numbers in numerical form.
-p proto Shows connections for the protocol specified by proto; proto
may be TCP or UDP. If used with the-s option to display
per-protocol statistics, proto may be TCP, UDP, or IP.
-r Displays the routing table.
-s Displays per-protocol statistics. By default, statistics are
shown for TCP, UDP and IP; the-p option may be used to specify < br />
a subset of the default.
interval Redisplays selected statistics, pausing interval seconds
between each display. Press CTRL C to stop redisplaying
statistics. If omitted, netstat will print the current
configuration information once.
Netstat some of the commonly used options
netstat-s – the option to display under each agreement were their statistics. If your application (such as a Web browser) run more slowly, or not display the Web page of the class of data, then you can use this option to check the information displayed. You need to look carefully at each line of statistics to find the wrong keywords, and to determine the problem.
netstat-e – This option displays statistics on the Ethernet. It lists the items, including the delivery of the total reported number of bytes of data, errors, delete the number, the number of packets and the number of broadcast. These statistics not only the number of packets sent, but also the number of received packets. This option can be used to some of the basic statistics of network traffic.
netstat-r – This option displays information about the routing table, similar to the back talking about using the route print command to see information. In addition to displaying a valid route, but also displays currently active connection.
netstat-a – This option displays a list of all valid connection information, including the establishment of the connection (ESTABLISHED), but also listens for connection requests (LISTENING) of those who connect, disconnect ( CLOSE_WAIT) or in line waiting state (TIME_WAIT), etc.
netstat-n – displays all the valid connection has been established.
Next we look at Microsoft is how to say?
this powerful Microsoft deliberately hide the command because it is somewhat complicated for the average user. We already know: Netstat can be used to get you the information system network connection (using the port, the protocol used, etc.), incoming and outgoing data, the connected remote system port, Netstat read in memory all the network information.
in Internet RFC standards, Netstat is defined as: Netstat is in the kernel to access the network and related information programs, it provides a TCP connection, TCP and UDP monitoring, process memory management related reports.
strong curiosity for people who have the above theory is tight enough, then we have to explain in detail the use of the various parameters and see what happens after the implementation of , the information displayed is what it meant, well, do not talk nonsense, and let us work together and experiment with it:)
C: \> netstat-a
Active Connections
Proto LocalAddress ForeignAddress State
TCPEagle: ftp Eagle: 0LISTENING
TCPEagle: telnet Eagle: 0LISTENING
TCPEagle : smtpEagle: 0LISTENING
TCPEagle: httpEagle: 0LISTENING
TCPEagle: epmap Eagle: 0LISTENING
TCPEagle: https Eagle: 0LISTENING
< br /> TCP Eagle: microsoft-ds Eagle: 0LISTENING
TCPEagle: 1030Eagle: 0LISTENING
TCPEagle: 6059Eagle: 0LISTENING
TCPEagle: 8001Eagle: 0LISTENING
TCPEagle: 8005Eagle: 0LISTENING
TCPEagle: 8065Eagle: 0LISTENING
TCP Eagle: microsoft-ds localhost: 1031ESTABLISHED
TCPEagle: 1031localhost: microsoft-ds ESTABLISHED
TCPEagle: 1040Eagle: 0LISTENING
TCP Eagle: netbios-ssn Eagle: 0LISTENING
TCPEagle: 1213218.85.139.65:9002 CLOSE_WAIT
TCPEagle: 2416219.133.63.142: https CLOSE_WAIT
TCPEagle: 2443219.133.63.142: https CLOSE_WAIT
TCPEagle: 2907192.168. 1.101:2774 CLOSE_WAIT
TCPEagle: 2916192.168.1.101: telnetESTABLISHED
TCPEagle: 2927219.137.227.10:4899 TIME_WAIT
TCPEagle: 2928219.137.227.10:4899 TIME_WAIT
TCPEagle: 2929219.137.227.10:4899 ESTABLISHED
TCPEagle: 3455218.85.139.65:9002 ESTABLISHED
TCP Eagle: netbios-ssn Eagle: 0LISTENING
UDP Eagle: microsoft-ds *: *
UDPEagle: 1046 *: *
UDPEagle: 1050 *: *
< br /> UDPEagle: 1073 *: *
UDPEagle: 1938 *: *
UDPEagle: 2314 *: *
UDPEagle: 2399 *: *
UDPEagle: 2413 *: *
UDPEagle: 2904 *: *
UDPEagle: 2908 *: *
UDPEagle: 3456 *: *
UDPEagle: 4000 *: *
UDPEagle: 4001 *: *
UDPEagle: 6000 *: * < br />
UDP Eagle: 6001 *: *
UDPEagle: 6002 *: *
UDPEagle: 6003 *: *
UDPEagle: 6004 *: *
UDPEagle: 6005 *: *
UDPEagle: 6006 *: *
UDPEagle: 6007 *: *
UDPEagle: 6008 *: *
UDPEagle: 6009 *: *
UDPEagle: 6010 *: *
UDPEagle: 6011 *: *
UDPEagle: 1045 *: *
UDPEagle: 1051 *: *
UDP Eagle: netbios-ns *: * < br />
UDP Eagle: netbios-dgm *: *
UDP Eagle: netbios-ns *: *
UDP Eagle: netbios-dgm *: *
we get one line to explain it:
Proto LocalAddress ForeignAddress State
TCPEagle: 2929219.137.227.10:4899 ESTABLISHED
protocol (Proto): TCP, refers to the transport layer protocol (What? know? Please use baidu search “TCP”, OSI seven-layer and TCP / IP-based four-but ^ _ ^)
local machine name (LocalAddress): Eagle, commonly known as computer name, the installation system settings, you can “My Computer” properties change, and the local open port for connection: 2929)
remote machine name (ForeignAddress): 219.137.227.10
remote port: 4899
State: ESTABLISHED
strong> < br />
September 16, 2009
1. Foreigntrade (trade) contract (Contract) invoice (invoice) 2. Bill of lading (waybill) L / C (letter of credit) buyer (the buyer) 3. Import (exports) export (import) corporation (company)
4. textile (textiles) telephone (telephone) manager (manager) 5. message (telegrams) order (terms) trouble (trouble) 6. minute (min) agree (consent) machinery (mechanical)
7. sales (sales) receive (receive) cable (T) 8. customer (the customer) accept (accepted) choice (selection) 9. industrial (industry) product ( product) terms (terms)
10. important (important) sign (signature) each (each) 11. business (business) start (start) wait (wait) 12. sure (sure) service (Service) rest (rest) 13. fair (fair) spend (spend) certainly (of course) 14. goods (goods) display (display) commodity (commodities)
15. silk (silk) garment (clothing) sample (sample) 16. sell (sell) market (markets) world (World) 17. example (example) of course (of course) popular (popular)
18. policy (policies) visit (visit) relation (relations) 19 . past (past) fact (fact) benefit (benefit) 20. commercial (business) cooperate (cooperation) future (future)
21. specification (specification) price (price) 22. FOB (FOB ) CIF (CIF)
23. inspection (testing) test (test) report (report) 24. certificate (Certificate) stamp (seal) health (health) 25. quality (quality) weight (weight) quantity (quantity)
26. wrong (false) colour (color) date (date) 27. shipment (shipment) answer (answer) delivery (delivery) 28. size (Size) percent (percent) toy (toys)
29. packing (packaging) carton (carton) kilogram (kg) 30. net weight (net weight) confirmation (confirmation) agent (an agent) 31. beneficiary (beneficiaries) applicant (the applicant ) opening bank (issuing bank) 32. Certificate of Quality (Quality Certificate) Certificate of Weight (Weight Certificate)
33. Certificate of Quantity (number of certificate) Certificate of packing (packing certificate)
34. Certificate of Health (health certificate) Certificate of Quarantine (quarantine certificate)
35. veterinary Certificate (veterinary certificate) Sanitary Certificate (Health Certificate)
36. Certificate of Origin (Origin Certificate) Certificate of Fumigation (Fumigation certificate)
37. Fumigation / Disinfection Certificate (fumigation / disinfection certificate)
38. Animal Health Certificate (Animal Health Certificate) 39. phytosanitary Certificate (phytosanitary certificate) 40. phytosanitary Certificate For Re – export ( re-plant quarantine certificate)
41. Sanitary Certificate For Conveyance transport health certificate
42. Quarantine Certificate For Conveyance transport and quarantine certificates
43. veterinary Health Certificate (veterinary health certificate) 44. consignee (consignee) consignor (shipper) 45. description of goods (of goods) 46. quantity / weight declared (inspection / weight)
47. Contract No. (contract number) Invoice No. ( invoice number)
48. place of arrival (arrival location) means of Conveyance (vehicle)
49. date of arrival (arrival time) B / L or Way Bill No. (bill of lading or waybill No.)
50. place of despatch (shipment port) port of destination (arrival port)
51. Date of completion of discharge (discharge date) 52. Mark
December 2, 2011
CET handouts and notes: read (XVI)
Our culture has caused most Americans to assume not only that our language is universal but that the gestures we use are understood by everyone. We do not realize that waving good-bye is the way to summon a person from the Philippines to one side, or that in Italy and some Latin-American countries, curling the finger to oneself is a sign of farewell.
Those private citizens who sent packages to our troops occupying Germany after World War II and marked them GIFT to escape duty payments did not bother to find out that “Gift” means poison in German. Moreover, we like to think of ourselves as friendly, yet we prefer to be at least 3 feet or an arm length away form others. Latins and Middle Easterners like to come closer and touch, which makes Americans uncomfortable.
Our linguistic (verbal) and cultural blindness and the casualness with which we take notice of the developed tastes, gestures, customs and languages ??of other countries, are losing us friends, business and respect in the world.
Even here in the United States, we make few concessions to the needs of foreign visitors. There are no information signs in four languages ??on our public buildings or monuments; we do not have multilingual (multilingual) guided tours. Very few restaurant menus have translations, and multilingual waiters, bank clerks and policemen are rare. Our transportation systems have maps in English only and often we ourselves have difficulty understanding them.
When we go abroad, we tend to cluster in hotels and restaurants where English is spoken. The attitudes and information we pick up are conditioned by those natives-usually the richer-who speak English. Our business dealings, as well as the nation diplomacy, are conducted through interpreters.
For many years, America and Americans could get by with cultural blindness and linguistic ignorance. After all, America was the most powerful country of the free world, the distributor of needed funds and goods.
But all that is past. American dollars no longer buy all good things, and we are slowly beginning to realize that our proper role in the world is changing. A 1979 Harris poll reported that 55 percent of Americans want this country to play a more significant role in world affairs; we want to have a hand in the important decisions of the next century, even though it may not always be the upper hand.
26. What makes women blind to the deceptive nature of high heels?
A) The multi-functional use of high heels.
B) Their attempt to show off their status.
< br /> C) The rich variety of high heel styles.
D) Their wish to improve their appearance.
Note: B option to show off to show off, C is the confusion options.
27. The author presentation of the positive side of high heels is meant ______________.
A) to be ironic
B) to poke fun at women
C) to be fair to the fashion industry
D) to make his point convincing
Note: Ironically,
28. The author uses the expression “those babies” (Line 3, Para.2) to refer to high heels __________.
A) to show their fragile characteristics
B) to indicate their feminine features
C) to show women affection for them
D) to emphasize their small size
29. The author chief argument against high heels is that ____________.
A) they pose a threat to lawns
B) they are injurious to women health
< br /> C) they don necessarily make women beautiful
D) they are ineffective as a weapon of defense
30. It can be inferred from the passage that women should _______________.
A) see through the very nature of fashion myths
B) boycott the products of the fashion industry
C) go to a podiatrist regularly for advice
CET handouts and notes: read (XVI) outside more information, please visit: New LONDON School> New Oriental English six> New Oriental English six read review information. You are also welcome on this site submissions, with their own account logged into the appropriate channels to
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November 24, 2011
Good evening, dear tomasters and guests! Tonight, I will do the project of CC1.Well, the theme of the CC1 is about introduction. < br />
As I am a rookie in tosmaster, maybe all of you don know me very well, and i just want to have a introduction to you.Well, back to the speech.I would like to make myself known by you with 4 key words: The first key word is joker. In the dictionary, jokers means those who makes joys.however, a joker responsbility is not making fun of others to get himself happiness, but to be the spreader of fun and joys! I like smiling, and a person don burn into tears easily! Take james as an example, i think james is an joker, he always brings us fun. I hope i can bring people around me happiness, affecting them with my effort. The second key word is active, which meams I always energetic. If there something that interests me or it worthwhile to do, I will go for it, no matter how tired i am. Before standing on the stage, i feel a little bit tired, but this is the firt time that i make an english speech in front of so many people, why not try to perform as active as you can, and leave people a good impression. I try to be active, energetic , which is the essential quality a tosmaster should have! And I do believe how you behave will effect others! My perform is telling others, hey guy, wake up! Be active! Show your endless power! Show your determination! The third key word is casualness.of course, casualness doesn mean i a casual person.It describes a kind of life style. Never force myself to do everything right or properly. Take this speech for example, the result is not that important, if i did it badly, that means i can make progress next time. if i did it well, let it be.cherish it. Anyway, I enjoy the process! what more, I don really pay much attention on which clothes to wear , what food food dinner. I think a leading a easy, simple life, I love it. Last but not the least, king.I would like to be the king of my life. That doesn mean i have to be in possession of too much wealth. In our lives, we will make a lot of decisions, some are important, some are less important. And I would like to make every desicion on my own. When i am growing up, i e made a lot desicions effected by others. I don like that way. Everyone is an individual who should take responsibilty for himself. I the king of my life.All I want to convey is that to be independent! I don like to rely on others.
November 6, 2011
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November 18, 2011
students who received the job. Frankly I came to Hangzhou, as far as I know the only one still sticking to the parodies PubMed students to read, sent me to encourage one another, of course, we also see the strength of these sentences is not a generic template or classroom can teach . My comments are below, the only way everyone will be more targeted to improve writing.
Zhang, today I parodies the first 06 years of reading the first paragraph. I quote:
① In spite of “endless talk of difference,” American society is an amazing machine for homogenizing people. Strong> ② There is “the democratizing uniformity of dress and discourse, and the casualness and absence of deference “characteristic of popular culture. strong> ③ People are absorbed into” a culture of consumption “launched by the 19th-century department stores that offered” vast arrays of goods in an elegant atmosphere. strong> ④ Instead of intimate shops catering to a knowledgeable elite, “these were stores” anyone could enter, regardless of class or background. strong> This turned shopping into a public and democratic act. “The mass media, advertising and sports are other forces for homogenization.
my parodies:
According to the first sentence, I think 11 years of environmental protection, I wrote a incomplete sentence:
In spite of “endless talk of signifcance strong> [g1] “, environmental protection is still a (long and winding) goal. strong> I want to express “long way to go in goal,” did not think of a suitable expression.
the same time I thought pension Cup 2005, I wrote such a sentence:
In spite of “endless talk of family responsibility”, taking care of our old strong> [g2] parents is still a headache to many young people.
strong> strong> According to the second sentence, I would like to up the cultural pot for 10 years, I wrote such a sentence:
There is “the combination of East and West, strong> [g3] the compatible existence of different thoughts “characteristic of cultural chafing-dish. strong> [g4]
strong> According to the third sentence, I think the 09-year network Far and near, I write such a sentence:
People are involved into a strong> “world of imagine strong> [g5] ” produced by the 20th-century Internet technology that offered strong> “vast arrays of informations strong> ” in computer.
strong> strong> According to the fourth sentence, I think the American girl in 2002, I wrote such a sentence:
Instead of fashionable clothes similar to other American girls, it is traditional Chinese costume which universal in our Yun-nan province . strong> not completely understand what you mean. But it is strong> followed by stress, it should use that strong> son. Many times they have to change, and self-improvement.
strong> strong> please help teachers to change, are you, thank you! I have a strong psychological endurance! Ha ha ha ~
strong> Summer Intensive of the students [g1] is not fluent so realistic, meaning that, although everyone about the importance of commonplace, but what is the importance of it? You can be replaced even though we always emphasis on sustainable development, environmental protection, but the vision seems a long way to go. However, English is the continued development of sustainable development [g2] suggested aged, so more respect. [G3] What combination of East and West? Should not be a geographical section, right? [G5] virtual world? Imagination of the world? imaginary world
November 12, 2011
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section must begin with the language concise, and direct cut to the chase. Beginning segment generally does not explore the subject in depth, the specific argument or narrative sections should be extended. Generally written in the beginning of section four, five can be. Candidates should note the following several points:
1) the role of the beginning of paragraph
general statement theme, make a point or argument, that the intention of writing.
2) candidates to write at the beginning of paragraphs should be avoided when a number of issues
① start off topic too far;
② regret or complain about the words used ;
③ content is not specific, saying nothing;
④ use of self-evident statements.
3) at the beginning section of the expressions
① use quotations (use a quotation)
use some famous celebrities, or people used proverbs , idioms, to determine the scope and direction of writing the article.
Example:
“Great minds must be ready not only to take the opportunity, but to make them.” xmlnamespace prefix = “st1″ ns = “urn: schemas- microsoft-com: office: smarttags “/> Colton, a great writer once remarked. But it still has a profound significance now. To a person, in whose lifetime opportunities are not many, to make opportunities is more essential to his success. < br />
② the use of specific numbers or detailed data (use figures or statistics)
detailed reference to specific figures or data, and then make a general analysis, indicate where the problem lies.
Example: In the past 5 years there has been a marked decline in the number of young married couples who want to have children, coupled with a growing trend toward delayed childbearing. According to official statistics, in 2003 , about 28 percent of married couples with wives under 35 gave no birth to children, compared with the 1993 level of 8 percent.
③ questions (ask a question)
raise controversial or exploratory specific questions with brief answers or to start and then leading a brief discussion.
Example: What do you want from your work? Money? Promotions? Interesting challenges? Continual learning? Work-based friendships? The opportunity to develop your own idea and potentials? Though we are all individuals and so our answers will differ, all agree that work provide more than material things.
④ given background (offer relevant background)
describe specific incidents of the time, place and occurrence of background and so on.
Example: Once in a newspaper I read of a crowd of people who remained appallingly indifferent to the plea of ??a mother. As she failed to offer the required amount of cash as a price to save her drowning son , the woman at last watched her son sink to death. The story is not rare in newspapers and on TV, and the casualness and detachment our people now have developed has aroused nationwide concern.
⑤ defined method ( give definition)
for discussion topics or issues to be defined, and then in depth.
Example: Flexibility is defined as being adaptable to change. In the course of your lifetime, it is essential that you learn to bend and flex around every new circumstance, as rigidity deprives you of the opportunity to see new possibilities. Paradigms change over time, and so must you. Your company may restructure, and you will have to survive. Your spouse may choose to leave the marriage, and you will have to cope. Technology will continue to advance and change, and you must constantly learn and adapt or risk becoming a dinosaur. Flexibility allows you to be ready for whatever curve lies ahead in life instead of getting blindsided by it.
⑥ theme syntax (use of topic sentence) < br />
beginning of the article topic sentence is highlighted with full theme, and then around the theme content development. Example:
Now people become increasingly aware of the importance of acquiring a mastery of a foreign language. To them, the knowledge of a foreign language, say, English, often means a good opportunity for one career, even a passport to a prosperous future. Many of them equate success in life with the ability of speaking a foreign language.
4) at the beginning section of the common core sentence
The arguer may be right about …, but he seems to neglect (fail) to mention (takesintosaccount) the fact that ….
As opposed to (Contrary to) widely (commonly / generally) held (accepted) belief (ideas / views), I believe (argue) that … Although many people believe that …, I doubt (wonder) whether the argument bears much analysis (close examination). The advantages of B outweigh any benefit we gained from (carry more weight than those of / are much greater than) A. Although it is commonly (widely / generally) held (felt / accepted / agreed) that …, it is unlikely to be true that … . There is an element of truth in this argument (statement), but it ignores a deeper and more basic (important / essential) fact (reason) that …. It is true that (True, / To be sure, / Admittedly,) …, but this is not to say (it is unlikely / it doesn follow / it doesn mean / it won be the case) that ….
The main (obvious / great) problem (flaw / drawback) with (in) this argument (view / remark) is that it is ignorant of (blind to) the basic (bare) fact that ….
It would be possible (natural / reasonable) to think (believe / take the view) that …, but it would be absurd (wrong) to claim (argue) that ….
In all the discussion and debate over …, one important (basic) fact is generally overlooked (neglected).
There is absolutely (in fact) no (every) reason for us to believe (accept / resist / reject) that ….
Logical (Valid / Sound) as this argument and I wholeheartedly agree with it, it appears insignificant (absurd) when … is takensintosconsideration (account).
To assume (suggest) that … is far from being proved (to miss the point).
A close (careful) inspection (examination / scrutiny) of this argument would reveal how flimsy (groundless / fallacious) it is.
On the surface (At first thought), it (this) may seem a sound (an attractive) suggestion (solution / idea) , but careful weighing on the mind (on closer analysis / on second thought), we find that …
Too much emphasis placed on (attention paid to / importance attached to) … may obscure (overlook / neglect) other facts ….
The danger (problem / fact / truth / point) is that ….
What the arguer fails to understand (consider / mention) is that ….
We don have to look very far to see (find out) the truth (validity) of this argument (proposition).
However just (logical / sound / valid) this argument may be, it only skims the surface of the problem.
Among the most convincing (important) reasons given (cited / offered / identified) by people for …, one should be stressed (emphasized / mentioned).
As far as I am concerned, however, I believe that ….
I believe that the title statement is valid because (of) ….
I agree with the above statement because I believe that ….
Although I appreciate that …, I cannot agree with the title statement.
There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of …. Those who object to … argue that …. But people who favor …, on the other hand, argue that ….
Currently (In recent years / In the past few years / For many years now), there is (has been) a (n) general (widespread / growing / widely held) feeling towards (concern over / attitude towards / trend towards / awareness of / realization of / illusion of / belief in) ….
Now it is commonly (widely / generally / increasingly) believed (thought / held / accepted / felt / recognized / acknowledged) that …. But I wonder (doubt) whether ….
These days we are often told that (often hear about) …, but is this really the case?
